Robin of Pensive has invented a new poetry form for the July
challenge, she has named this new poetic form "The Pensive"
so join in the fun and get all poetic.
What is a Pensieve? A titled, five-line poem; each line correlates to one of the five senses--sight, sound, scent, taste, touch--and describes the subject (title). The goal is for the reader to take on the poem as his own, being able to "experience" your subject through your words, by seeing, hearing, smelling, tasting and feeling what you described.
"Ode to the senses."
I see a note here from Pensive
And I hear just what it is that she thinks
Her idea has touched me, right where I live
I have so longed for the taste of success
Well here is my dismal effort, right here, and it stinks.
I sorta wanted to stick to some semblance of rhyming but in keeping
with the free flowing example I completely scrapped the meter, but
I think all the senses got a mention.
It is supposed to be a fun exercise isn't it?
Pop over Here and see what else has been written.